Feedback 18-09-2012

From my last tutorial I realized that key points on my project are still not clear, strong or concrete enough.
I was advised to:
– Reevaluate my target audience.
– Define more precisely the goals of my animation
Then, I have to:
– Start designing the characters putting special attention to its audience appeal
– Start working on the storyboard

For my next week presentation, I’m planning to:
–    Work on the design of my central character, to be able to show a rough character model sheet to the tutors.
–    Translate my script into a visual representation. Creating a series of sketches or a raw storyboard to give the tutors an idea of how the final piece is going to look like. It could be a good idea to create an animatic video with the sketches to better communicate my idea.